Opinion please

Esta es una primera prueba para el diseño de mi invitación de boda (las dos caras de la tarjeta), nada es definitivo, ni los colores ni la tipo ni nada, pero bueno, imagino que por aquí irá la cosa.

Creo que aprovecharé el hueco del corazón del troquel para enrollar un cordón del que cuelgue la tarjeta de visita, y quizá también lleve un cordón con alguna figura pequeñita de fieltro, eso está por ver (si el presupuesto me deja )

Me gustaría que me dieseis una opinión respecto al formato y el texto, que es lo único que tengo más o menos claro.

Muchas gracias!!

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This is a first design for my wedding invitation (two faces of the same card). Nothing is definitive, maybe I change the colors or the typography.

I think that I'll use the empty heart for to put a cord with our visit card, and maybe I put another cord with some little detail of felt (it depends of the price)

The text means (more or less, sorry for mistakes in my english ):

Óscar get married.
It will be a 19th september
His wedding will be at 20:30 h.
After it, he will celebrate it in Palacete Mirador de Córdoba.
He wishes you will be there and he would like you confirm your presence.
His phone numer is xxxxxxxxx and his e-mail is xxxxxx@hotmail.com


Vicky get married.
It will be a saturday of 2009.
Her wedding will be in Alcázar de los Reyes Cristianos.
After the wedding, she will celebrate it in a nice place at 22:00 h.
She would appreciate to share it with you and she would like you confirm your presence.
You can call her to xxxxxxxxx or send her a e-mail to xxxxxxx@gmail.com

I hope you give some opinion about the format and the text (if the information is clear, for example).

Thanks a lot!